Wednesday, July 23, 2008

Page 14: Wake Up Call!

Really bad dialogue and plotting...these pages are getting tougher to do!

7 comments:

Naldoman said...

Shoots my theories to HELL, but I can still compensate and salvage the page I half-drew....again I'll take it next week if no one else calls it by the time I return from San Diego.

Gary Fitzgerald said...

will be interested to see what the dialogue is, so we can find out how much of what happened in the previous pages actually happened and how much was "programming/dreaming"

Gary Fitzgerald said...

sooooo....
these are the aliens that we saw in the middle panel of page 9.. hunting around the wreck..
which implies that the crash did happen, but that the humans were retrieved from the wreckage and put in the tanks.. which then means that everything since the middle of page two had been the 'programming' and had not really happened..



or not ..

Stephen Reid said...

You are correct!
The crash happened...and the alien cought them and tried to brainwash 'em but it didn't take...so's there going to throw them both into an arena to fight some creatures.

Sci-Fi Gladiator!...

and I just had to bring the Captain beack into it.

;-)

Gary Fitzgerald said...

DIBS..


sorry kids..


couldn't resist..

zoida!!

Naldoman said...

I'm still thinkin' ALL of the pages are still valid. We have simply jumped ahead in time a bit between pages 12 and 13, so we don't really know how they were captured or exactly what Gaines-2 is. Did G-2 deliver them to the trogs? Is he in a tank as well? Did they grind up G-1 into hamburger to sell at the combat arena? I even know the secret of the combat mech shadow, but will have to wait for a change to reveal it.

One thing is for certain -- the trog queen will have her satisfaction!!!

Gary Fitzgerald said...

running late.. might miss the fri deadline.. (still trying though)..